In lockdown we got set a task from our teacher Mrs.Bailey to write a piece of writing to persuade her if the Tokyo Olympics should have gone on or not.
Here is my writing.
THE 2021 TOKYO OLYMPICS SHOULDN'T OF GONE AHEAD
Imagine the scenario where a sports pavilion would be filled with several infected lungs and there would be absolutely no cure for this fatal ailment.
This is the absolute thought which concerns my opinion that the 2021 Tokyo Olympics shouldn't have gone ahead during a time when fatality is in the air.
Covid 19,namely known as coronavirus is a deadly disease directly affecting the human respiratory system with no cure. It mainly spreads through the air and via body contacts. A highly crowded area such as the game's environment can be considered as a breeding nest for the virus.
Therefore, the ultimate reason to cancel the 2021 Tokyo Olympics is because the audience and the players are at a higher risk of contracting the virus. In a nutshell, global security can be maintained by social distancing and avoiding huge crowds of people.
Therefore,I strongly believe that the 2021 Tokyo Olympics shouldn’t have gone ahead because players and the audience are at a higher risk of getting it, and it is unsafe.
Hi Inshirah,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see the opinion writing skills you have been working on in class are able to be transferred into an independent piece of writing. I like how you have used some new technical language to get your point across and the structure you have used is correct too.
Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Kind Regards,
Mrs B.